Delights: Page 1 WIP

The first page of my first Graphic Novel Assignment that I'm still adding some touches to. This is based off of someone else's script, which is horrid by the way, buuut I still had to put some work into it so might as well post. After I'm done with all the pages, which should be by the end of this week since I have to start on the new assignments, I'll post.

Set late 1950's New York. Critique is welcome.

*sigh* Eventually I'll have to include a warning thanks to offensive material, once again, not my fault. The writers, may be face a terrible fate some day bc he deserves it.